Screen Writing (LO 4) Final Script

 

 

 

 

The Lost Kids

By

Malik Muhammad Azam Khan

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                          

 

 

 

Scene# 1

 

INT.      LIVING ROOM - DAY A typical middle class home. Noor, an adorable little girl, is sitting on the floor playing with a lipstick and a makeup compact. A handbag lies next to her with its contents scattered.

 

Zain, an older boy, walks into the room. His eyes widen when he sees the mess Noor has made.

              

                 Zain Noor! What are you doing??

 Zain Noor! Tum kiya kr rhe ho?? Or Kiya kr rhe ho tum yee han!?

 

He quickly rushes to her and proceeds to put the items back into the handbag.

                     Zain Give me that!

                     Zain Mujy do yee!

 

He snatches the lipstick and compact from her.

 

          Zain You’re always getting me into trouble!

          Zain Tum hamesha mujy musebat me dalti ho!

 

He continues to pick up items off the floor.

  

 

 

 

Scene # 2

 

 

LIVING ROOM – DAY, Suddenly, Maida, a stern looking woman, enters the living room.

She sees Zain kneeling on the floor holding the handbag in one hand, and a wallet in the other. She gasps. Maida You! Maida marches to Zain and grabs the bag and wallet.

            

               Maida I knew it you little thief!

Maida Mi janti thee k tum he chor ho! Or Mi janti thee k tum he choty chor ho!

 

She grabs Zain by the ear.

 

Maida I knew I’ve been missing money since very long! How dare you go through my things!

Maida Mi janti thee kafi arsy sy miry mery pessy gyb ho rhy hein! Tumhari himat kisy hui miri chezo ko cherny ki! Or kholny ki!

 

Noor begins to cry. Maida grabs her arm roughly.

 

Maida And you! How many times have I told you to leave my things alone!

Maida or tum! Kitni bar miny tum sy kha hy ki miry chizo ko na chira kro!

 

Maida scolds Noor as she shakes her violently.

 

 

 

Scene # 3

 

 

LIVING ROOM + KITCHEN – DAY, Zain runs to the kitchen and grabs a knife.

He returns to the living room and points the knife at Maida.

 

(CONTINUED) CONTINUED: 3. Zain Let her go!

                Zain Noor ko jany do! Or Noor ko chor do!

 

Maida turns to Zain and sees the knife. She glares at him.

Maida You put that down right now before I call your father.

Maida iss sy pehly ki mi tumhary baap ko phone kro tum isy nechy rakh do.

 

Zain holds his position. Maida begins to inch towards him.

                  Maida I said put it down!

  Maida Mi kihti hu isy nechy rakh do! Or mi kihti hu hatao isy!

 

  

 

Scene # 4

 

 

LIVING ROOM – DAY, Suddenly, Imran enters the room. He is wearing a tie and carries a briefcase.

He sees Zain waving a knife at Maida. Noor is crying even louder.

 

               Imran What’s going on here??

               Imran Kiya ho rha hy yahan??

 

Zain and Maida look towards Imran, speechless.





Scene # 5

 

INT. Zain AND Noor’s ROOM - NIGHT Zain sits on the edge of the bed while Noor sleeps.

 

He listens to Imran and Maida fighting in the next room.

 




Scene # 6

 

Imran AND Maida’s ROOM – NIGHT Imran and Maida are arguing a lot and Imran is trying to convince Maida that they are children. And children make mistakes.

 

            Maida I can’t take those kids anymore!

       Maida Mi ab in bacho ko or bardasht nhi kr sgti!

 

   Imran Look would you just calm down? Keep your voice down!

Imran Acha kia tum thora pursakon ho jwo gee! Orr apni awaz thori ayista rakho!

 

 

           Maida They’re not just troublemakers,

       Maida Imran tumhy pata hy sirf parishan nhi krty

 

Imran, I can deal with mischief. But can’t deal with stealing!

Imran, Mi shrarto sy nimat sgta hu. Likn chori syn hi nimat sgyta!

 

 

      Maida, And you saw him, he was waving a knife at me!

  Maida, Orr tum ny usy dikha k wo muj pr chorii lihra rha tha!

 

Imran Look I’ll take care of it alright?! Just relax will you?? I’ve had a long day and I don’t want to talk about this right now!

Imran Dikho mi issy theek kr lu ga! Tum pur sakoon ho jwo. Mira ik bhoot lamba din guzra hy or mi is bary mi abhye bat nhi krna chahta!

 

Maida (O.S.) So you don’t care if he ends up stabbing me one day??

Maida To tumhy koi parwa nhi hy k agr wo ik din mujy chorii mar dita hy too??

 

(CONTINUED) CONTINUED: 6 Imran (O.S.) Maybe I don’t! Maida (O.S.) Get out! Get out you son of a bitch! Get out!!

Imran Shyed mujy nhi hy! Maida Bahir nikal jwo! Bahir niklo kutii k bachy! Bahir nikalo!!





Scene # 7

 

 

Zain AND Noor’s ROOM - NIGHT Zain hears a door SLAM.

He quickly gets under the covers.

 

Moments later, Imran enters. He walks and sits by Zain. Zain looks up at him.

 

Imran Zain, what you did this afternoon was very wrong.

Imran Zain, Ajj dupahir jo tum ny kia tha wo bhoot galat tha.

 

              Zain But dad, she was hurting Noor!

       Zain Likn baba, wo Noor ko taklif pohoncha rhe thee!

 

Imran Maida would never hurt Noor, alright? She’s just trying to put a little discipline in you two. Why do you always have to make things so difficult for her?

Imran Maida Noor ky sath kabhe kuch buran hi kry ge, theekhy? Wo sirf tum dono ko thora discipline sikhany ki koshis kr rhe hy. Q tum us k liya chizo ko itna mushkil bana dety ho?

 

Zain looks down and does not respond. Imran She’s your mother now Zain. Help me out a bit alright?

Imran Ab wo tumhari maa hy Zain. Miri madat kro chizo ko theek krny mi theekhy?

 

Imran stands up and heads for the door.

                      Imran Get some rest.

                      Imran Aram kro abb.

Imran leaves the room.




Scene # 8

 

Zain AND Noor’s ROOM – NIGHT, Zain pulls out a drawer at a bedside table. He pulls out a picture.

INSERT - Picture of Zain and Noor with a woman.

 

BACK TO SCENE He flips the photograph backwards and finds an address written. He reads it and places it back.

 



Scene # 9

 

9. EXT. HOUSE - DAY Maida opens the door and walks out, She is hold a bag on her shoulder.

 

Zain is watching from inside the house. Moments later Zain walks outside the house.

 



Scene # 10

 

EXT.ROADSIDE - DAY Zain is walking on empty road, after walking for sometime He looks back and sees Noor.

 

She is holding her white teddy bear in one arm. Zain stops and starts walking back to meet her.

             Zain Stop following me. Go home.

             Zain mira pecha band kro. Ghar jwo.

 

Noor just looks without saying any word,

Zain starts walking Again, he looks back she is not following. Few seconds later Zain looks back, she is following again.




Scene # 11

 

ROADSIDE – DAY, Zain reaches one spot and sits down to rest. He looks around and sees Noor siting down looking at him. He stands up and starts walking again, and Noor starts following him.

 

ROADSIDE – DAY, Zain keeps on walking, he reaches one spot and sits down to rest.

He looks around and sees Noor siting down looking at him.

 

He sits up and starts walking again, she follows.

 



Scene # 12

 

EXT.ROADSIDE - DAY They reach a busy road, rikshaws are passing by.

Zain turns and looks at Noor and Waits for her.

Zain stops a rikshaw, the rikshaw stops. He grabs Noor’s hand and enters in the rikshaw. And then he tells the rikshaw driver about the neighborhood,

                   And says take us there.

                   Zain Hamy yaha jana hy.

 



Scene # 13

 

 

EXT.ROADSIDE/STREET - DAY Zain and Noor keep walking on the busy streets holding each other’s hands.

They find themselves in between the tall buildings, busy crowds and heavy traffic of the city.

 

                      Noor I’m hungry.

                  Noor Mujy bhook lagi hy.

 

Zain pulls out some money from his pocket with a smiling face. Noor smiles bigger.

Zain buys some bread and water and gives it to Noor.

 

Noor take a quick bite and suddenly looks at Zain. She realizes that he isn’t eating.

She breaks the bread into two halfes and gives him one half. He smiles, takes the piece and eats.




Scene # 14

 

(CONTINUED) CONTINUED: 14. Zain and Noor walks towards a security guard, who stands in front of a shop. They query the address by showing him the photograph.

The guard shakes his head.

He and Noor drinks water, Zain gets up. He takes out the photograph from his pocket and reads the address on it. doesn’t know. 




Scene # 15

 

EXT.ROADSIDE/STREET – DAY Zain and Noor continue to ask everyone the address, while walking down the street.

Some shake their heads and some don’t even respond.

 

At the end of the street, they are blissed when one lady guides them with the directions. They walk in accordance and reach the WEST MARINA APPARTMENTS. INT. 

 



Scene # 16

 

WEST MARINA APPARTMENTS - DAY Zain and Noor walk from door to door till they reach the apartment 314.

 

Zain knocks the door and waits for the response with a smile.

Moments later a woman opens the door. Zain is surprised.

 

He looks at Noor and turns back to the woman. He shows her the photograph and the address on it.

The woman reads the address, turns back the photograph and looks at the picture.

 

She shakes her head and shrugs. Zain ’s excitement punctures. He holds Noor’s hand and walks out of the apartment.




Scene # 17

 

DISSOLVE TO: EXT.ROADSIDE - DAY During the rush hour, Zain and Noor sit in between a busy street. Their clothes are worn out and their faces are dirty. Noor’s face is pale and her lips dry. Her dirty bare feet has a bulging over the skin.

 

Zain begs for money, by running after each and everyone on the street.

Noor sits in a corner and watches her brother beg. Some give him money but many walk away ignoring. Noor sits in a corner and watches her brother beg. 



Scene # 18

 

INT.WAREHOUSE - NIGHT Zain and Noor enters into an old warehouse. They reach their spots of rest, which is the dusty floor with few cardboard pieces across.

Noor lies on the floor. Zain reaches Noor. He observes the red spots that are developed on Noor’s back.

 

He tries to touch her skin but takes back his hand. He strokes Noor’s hair and weeps simultaneously. 



Scene # 19

 

WAREHOUSE - NIGHT (CONTINUED) CONTINUED: 19. Noor I’m hungry

                    Noor Mujy bhook lagi hai.

Zain continues to stroke her hair. Noor closes her eyes.

Zain walks out of the warehouse. Noor opens her eyes and sees him going.




Scene # 20

 

EXT/INT.STREET - NIGHT Zain walks down the street and reaches a shop. He sees a lot of food material in the shop. He observes that no one is around.

Cautiously Zain picks a couple of bread loafs from the shop and runs.

 

An elderly man sees this and chases him.

At a point he pushes Zain. Zain falls on the ground.

The man starts beating Zain. He slaps and kicks Zain.

A group gathers around to watch.

Zain looks at the people who have surrounded and finds Noor.




Scene # 21

 

STREET - NIGHT Noor rushes in and knees near Zain. She tries to cover him by her hands from getting beaten.

 

She starts crying. The elderly man stops beating Zain and walks away. The group disperse while Zain gets into his feet with a lot of pain. Zain and Noor walk. 




Scene # 22

 

EXT.STREET - DAY The streets are busy as usual. It is the rush hour again.

Noor sits down and sees Zain is begging for money. A man in suit walks past Zain.

Zain starts requesting this man harder for money. The man keep walking and while reaching his pocket. Zain keeps following him.

Noor sees her brother walking away and follows him into the crowd. The man pulls out a 20rupees note and gives it to Zain.

Zain is extremely happy and runs back to his sister. 




Scene # 23

 

STREET - DAY As he reaches the spot, he finds out that Noor is missing.

He starts searching for Noor. He walks across the streets, searches the shops, runs around everywhere but cannot find his sister.

He gives up and begins to cry After a few minutes, some thought occurs in his mind and he walks quickly down the street. 




Scene # 24

 

24. INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT Zain enters the warehouse and finds Noor lying down. He is shocked and relieved at the same time.

He gets closer to Noor and sits beside her. Zain clears his wet eyes and walks out of the warehouse. And a couple of minutes, he walks in and sits beside Noor.

Zain lays down next to her, and wraps his arms around her. He closes his eyes, and falls asleep. 

 


Scene # 25

 

EXT.COFFEE SHOP - DAY Zain and Noor are walking on the street as usual looking around to get something to eat.

Zain looks across the street and landed his eyes on Maida sitting by a coffee shop window.

 

Maida notices the two. They stare at each other.

Zain then takes Noor’s hand and they begin to walk away.

Maida keeps on staring at them walking away, Noor looks back at her. 




Scene # 26

 

COFFEE SHOP - DAY Imran comes and sits down across Maida as she continues to stare out the window.

Imran turns and looks where Maida is looking but sees only people walking and cars passing away.

 

             Imran What are you looking at?

             Imran Tum kiya dikh rhe ho?

 

He turns and looks at her,

she smiles. Maida Oh nothing, just watching the crowd.

Maida ohh kuch nhi bs logo ko dikh rhe hu.

 



Scene # 27

 

EXT. ROADSIDE - DAY We see Zain and Noor, hand in hand, walking down a busy street. The end.

 

 

 

 

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